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shiznit
New Born Fropkian
Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2007 6:50 am Posts: 10
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 eVeRyTiMe
everytime i see your face it seems wht world is in space everytime i feel your touch i feel my heart beat in a rush
everytime we laugh and smile i know that we could go a mile everytime our love for each other glow i know you and i and our love will grow
even though you're far from me i know in my heart you'll always be and even ifdays and nights will pass i know that you will be the last
i feel that i'm too much expecting coz i'm too tired of searching and waiting but if i'm wrong and mistaken utmost i've said what my heart is telling
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| Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:30 am |
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Piyusha
Invaluable Fropkian
Joined: Thu Jun 01, 2006 10:23 am Posts: 35221 Location: Parody of Life..!
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great work yaar.. but wat if the last line is 'utmost i've said wat my heart has spoken' heheheh:P tat goes with 'but if i m wrong n mistaken'
DONT MIND..jst a feel to make it more perfect
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| Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:34 am |
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shiznit
New Born Fropkian
Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2007 6:50 am Posts: 10
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Piyusha wrote: great work yaar.. but wat if the last line is 'utmost i've said wat my heart has spoken' heheheh:P tat goes with 'but if i m wrong n mistaken'
DONT MIND..jst a feel to make it more perfect thanks...
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| Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:52 am |
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Saurabh
Site Admin
Joined: Mon May 29, 2006 7:44 pm Posts: 87547 Location: Fropki HQ
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Gr8 poems buddy... Keep it up...
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| Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:08 pm |
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