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everytime i see your face
it seems wht world is in space
everytime i feel your touch
i feel my heart beat in a rush

everytime we laugh and smile
i know that we could go a mile
everytime our love for each other glow
i know you and i and our love will grow

even though you're far from me
i know in my heart you'll always be and
even ifdays and nights will pass
i know that you will be the last

i feel that i'm too much expecting
coz i'm too tired of searching and waiting
but if i'm wrong and mistaken
utmost i've said what my heart is telling


Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:30 am
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great work yaar..
but wat if the last line is 'utmost i've said wat my heart has spoken'
heheheh:P
tat goes with 'but if i m wrong n mistaken'

DONT MIND..jst a feel to make it more perfect


Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:34 am
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Piyusha wrote:
great work yaar..
but wat if the last line is 'utmost i've said wat my heart has spoken'
heheheh:P
tat goes with 'but if i m wrong n mistaken'

DONT MIND..jst a feel to make it more perfect


thanks...


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Gr8 poems buddy... Keep it up...


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